Hi Joel, Your narrative was really scary! I always worry about crashing when I fly- how terrifying it would be. You illustrated your story really well with different photographs and I like the expression in your voice. When you record your voice- be sure to wait an extra second before you press stop and then it won't cut off your voice. You may also like to watch your tale again to see if you can locate where you need more full stops and capitals. Overall, I am very impressed with your narrative, thanks for sharing. From Diana
Hi Joel,
ReplyDeleteYour narrative was really scary! I always worry about crashing when I fly- how terrifying it would be. You illustrated your story really well with different photographs and I like the expression in your voice. When you record your voice- be sure to wait an extra second before you press stop and then it won't cut off your voice. You may also like to watch your tale again to see if you can locate where you need more full stops and capitals. Overall, I am very impressed with your narrative, thanks for sharing.
From Diana